("Foggy Lake" by Vicious)
A few centuries ago, a fisherman came across an abandoned
lamp in a forest. There was some dust on the lamp so the fisherman rubbed the
lamp with his forearm. All of a sudden, a genie appeared.
“Alas! You
have freed me!” Exclaimed the genie.
“Wait, are
you a genie?” asked the fisherman. The genie nodded and smiled.
“And
because you have freed me, I am going to reward you,” the genie replied. He
snapped his fingers and took the fisherman to a lake in the middle of the four
hills, past the mountains. The genie explained that the fisherman could fish in
the lake in order to capture the most incredible fish. However, the fisherman
could only fish in the lake ONCE a day, otherwise he would be punished. With
the genie’s instructions, the fisherman caught a net full of huge, beautiful
fish.
“Sell the
fish to the sultan and you will never grow poor,” the genie said.
The
fisherman did as he was told. He went to the palace to sell the fish to the
sultan, who was amazed by the fish.
“Take me to
the lake that produced these incredible fish,” the sultan ordered.
The
fisherman wanted more money, so he took the sultan past the mountain to the
lake in the middle of the four hills.
When they
had arrived, a thick layer of fog was covering the lake. All of a sudden, the
fog began to clear and they spotted a huge palace made out of dark black marble
appeared just beyond the lake. There was an iron gate in front of the palace
slightly ajar, so the fisherman and the sultan snuck through the small opening.
Once they
were inside, they walked into a huge room that had a long ruby velvet carpet,
gold curtains, and tapestries all over the walls. Out of nowhere, there was a
loud scream. The sultan and the fisherman hid behind a black marble column,
hoping to hide from any danger. Then there was absolute silence.
The two
figured it was safe to explore the mysterious palace a little more. They began
to walk down one of the long hallways and found a young man with the lower half
of his body made out of the same black marble that the palace was.
“What
happened to you?” asked the fisherman.
“I was
selfish and I wanted to get more fish from the lake, so I fished twice in one
day. The genie found out, and he turned me into stone to keep me as his
prisoner forever!” said the young man.
Terrified,
the sultan and the fisherman sprinted out of the palace. They kept running
until they were as far away from the palace and the lake as possible. The
fisherman did not want to risk turning into marble, so he vowed to never come
near the lake ever again. Thus, he enjoyed the riches that he had already
gotten from the magnificent fish, and still never grew poor.
Author's Note: In the original story, there was a genie who was freed by the fisherman. The genie rewarded the fisherman by letting him fish in the lake and sell the fish to the sultan. My twist on the story was that the palace belonged to the genie and that the young boy was a prisoner for fishing in the lake twice in one day. I also had the sultan and the fisherman chicken out and never come near the lake again.
Bibliography: "The Arabian Nights' Entertainments" by Andrew Lang; link to the reading online
I enjoyed this story, and it was easy to follow. Your twist was unique, and definitely believable. I know that if I saw a man turned to stone I’d bolt out of there too. I wouldn’t want to end up the same way! I’m glad that the fisherman and sultan were smart enough to not fish in the lake again.
ReplyDeleteI read this story retold by another student so I was semi familiar with the plot while I was reading. I liked the twists you decided to add to it. Your writing is very clear and precise which makes stories easy to understand. I liked how you described the genie...in my head it was like something out of Aladdin. Great story, I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your retelling of this story. I am not familiar with this story. But I like the twist you put on it. Making to where there was a lesson to be learned. Which I can assume was to never be greedy, and be thankful of what you are given. It was a really nice read! Great Job!
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